FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE
September 5, 2008
Preston Parker
President
ABC Real Estate LLC
123 Creative Way, Logan, Ut 84341
801-555-4567
HOPE RESTORED FOR HOUSING MARKET
ABC Real Estate Brings New Change For Cache Valley
LOGAN, Utah -Sept. 5, 08- ABC Real Estate LLC its company’s new and creative way to buy and sell homes. Investors can expect 10-20% back in the next 2-3 years and help residents in the housing market.
Bill Gatten, a lawyer from California, started the first company in Salt Lake City, UT. His hope in beginning this company was to be able to make it simple for middle class people to buy and own a house in today’s market. More information about Bill Gatten can be found at Landtrust.net
President Preston Parker has started ABC Real Estate here in Cache Valley using the same system. “We’re a lot smarter now than we were in 1929. By using land trusts, we can help people who are struggling keep their homes and for those who don’t have a home, we can help them get one.”
ABC Real Estate has high hopes or helping the housing market here in cache valley. Their new company is a great investment and is expected to do well.
Megan Hanselman, PR Specialist
Utah State University
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3 comments:
This was a really good press release. It seems like you're a natural writer and you give out the information clearly. I was impressed because I know how much time you had to get the info, organize it, and write the release. I have nothing critical to say because this was a lot better than mine. Great Job!
Hey Meg, well I think you actually did a really good job with this press release, considering the amount of time we were allowed. I only have some minor suggestions. I would consider bolding the headling a little and making it a little bigger. Also, in your first sentence, there is a gramatical error. I think it is just a typo. There is also one in the quote you have from Preston Parker. Also, I think in your lead, the main point is to get out that Parker is opening up a new ABC Real Estate in Logan. That is the news, so maybe make sure that is in your lead, not just the stuff about Bill. Anyway, it was still great! Keep a truckin away man!
hey way to go on getting a quality article out! it sounds great :)
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